Sometimes it's hard to move on after we experience something heart breaking. We just have to hope for better days, they'll come along sooner or later. Nice job 5/5

Things are different now
I must accept it. No longer cry
and to the life I used to know
I guess this is goodbye.

I loved these lines. Its nicely written and the flow is flawless.

Tc

I thought it was perfect and nicley penned, the flow wass great , there was no mistakes
5/5

Excellent job on this piece. The dispair and sadness can be felt in every word you have penned'

I have no reason to wake up
No reason to get out of bed
Today is nothing special
Just another day I dread

Love this stanza.
Take care Cindy

I liked this piece of poetry. You portryed emotions great in this and i liked the short lines they were quite capturing. Well done on this sad poem. ~mel

Sad poems are breaking my heart. This one almost did. Please keep up it! 5/5

Very good... it's very easy to understand this one... it almost makes u feel the same way when u read it

You are a really good writer. I liked this alot. I know how that feels..it's hard and painful. Great poem though. You really know how to write. Keep up the great work..I'm going to add you to my favs if that is cool. Great job!
Crystal