Comments : Every minute

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    June
    This is so heartbreaking. The sadness of not being with the one you love is so painful.

    Falling in love I never meant to do ,
    and I've not felt this way in years.
    But keeping my feelings a secret ,
    is now starting to leave me in tears.

    These lines bring tears to the eyes.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by BlessedByAnAngel

    So simple and so beautiful. A sad but lovely write, loved it. Great work :) 5/5

    -Blessed

  • 17 years ago

    by Lameez Petersen

    What a lovely piece of writing! You ahev captured so much of what is happening in some of our lives. My pillows is constantly wet with tears and to make things worse, I'm so married with 4 kids yet fell in love with another. Hope things work out for you!

    Keep writting!

  • 17 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    Distance may be a really hard thing to get through but it at the end the of the day, its going to strengthen what you have...with respect to the poem..amazing work, well done

  • 17 years ago

    by always in my heart

    Very beautiful... <3 please check out my poems and quotes....thanx

    xx-MeGGie

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    "Falling in love I never meant to do ,
    and I've not felt this way in years.
    But keeping my feelings a secret ,
    is now starting to leave me in tears."

    ^ Those line truly had tugged my heart. An unrequited [secret] love, in all likelihood to all other types of romance, is utterly problematical and painful. This endears me completely because it seems to narrate my own account as well.
    Bittersweet.