Broken mirror

by isabel   May 24, 2007


"Broken mirror, tell me why
Sing me your sad lullaby
Why did you decide to break?"

I saw her scars, I saw her knife
I saw she took away her life
I saw how her eyes looked fake

Her reflection made her cry
She coldly smiled and tried to lie
I know I have caused her death

It broke my heart, her suicide
I broke myself, on the outside
In the moment of her last breath

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Wow nice poem. i like it alott.. keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by PlasticSmile

    Wow, only two words can describe this poem, simply amazing!

    I love the idea of this poem.

    I abosolutely LOVED it !

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    This poem is absolutely amazing! The flow was brilliant for the rhyming scheme you chose (which I thought was very original and refreshing). The word choice was excellent but what really made this poem was the phrases you've used. It's the way that was written that made this poem so brilliant.

    Very high marks from me. I loved it! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bare My Paradox

    "Broken mirror, tell me why
    Sing me your sad lullaby
    Why did you decide to break?"

    poetry couldn't get any better for me, its beautiful...moistened my eyes...

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Again you have great work i love it

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