This is another good poem, i liked it a lot. I thought that it showed some kind of passion your have. Weel done xxx alex xxx

This is beautiful...
The pain and emotion scream through the words in this, and there is so much depth.
I liked the ending, to me it showed that even though you miss them, you are still graeful for what you had, and you haven't let that be contaminated by resentment and hate.
Beautiful.

That was lovely written and nicely panned. emotions arestrong. take care5/5

I agree with Jenni Marie that the pain and emotion was just jumping up and down, waving their arms and shouting at the tops of their lungs. brilliantly written. 5/5 keep writing!

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~NinjaGirl~

Interesting poem... I don't like the way you wrote this piece. It is good but it isn't great like rest of your poems. I think that this poem deserves 4/5