by Midnight Sun May 24, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
You come from behind me |
by SilentRebuke
I loved the third stanza. especially the line: i feel your breath inside my lungs |
by *Charisma*
I LOVE the line, so close I can hear your thoughts!!!! Great imagery there but in your 8th line....I would take out the word "every" because it tosses the flow around. Other than that, beautiful job! |