Gazing out my window

by BrokenBarbie   May 24, 2007


Gazing out my window,
watching days pass by,
i can see things, that never really caught my eye.
like the butterfly's erratic flight,
and the fading day, that turns slowly into night.

gazing out my window,
watching days just drift by,
i can see things, that never caught my eye.
like the drops of rain, slapping on the ground,
or the drifting moon, that never goes down.

gazing out my window,
watching days pass by,
i can see things, that never really caught my eye.
like the way the clouds make shapes, from morning till noon,
or that the sunset is a marvelous view.

gazing down from heaven,
no more days, will pass me by
all i can see is people i love, cry.
to many days i pushed aside,
but at least i saw some of the more wonderful things, in life.
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Hi i wrote this piece on behalf of my Nan who spent her last few days on this earth watching out of her window trying to see the little things in life that no one really pays attention to. thanks for reading hope you enjoyed it.

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  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow this is amazing, and it does feel like you were put in her shoes very well. Then we felt like we had been placed somewhere other then our own shoes as well. Magnificent job.

  • 16 years ago

    by LorelaiVIP

    This poem made me cry. Its very good becky. I'm sorry about your friend. Keep writing, I'm glad to see someone who actually writes about what theyre feeling. <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Suta

    This poem was really sad,you drawned my attention.
    You got the tension in every line!
    Well done! ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awwwww, i have shivers now. thats sooo cute, its amzing how you could write that to sound like she has written it, sounds like a wonderful person who will be truly missed. well done, i very much love this poem xxxxxx maybe try another one simliar? xxxx