Awwwww, i have shivers now. thats sooo cute, its amzing how you could write that to sound like she has written it, sounds like a wonderful person who will be truly missed. well done, i very much love this poem xxxxxx maybe try another one simliar? xxxx

This poem was really sad,you drawned my attention.
You got the tension in every line!
Well done! ^_^

This poem made me cry. Its very good becky. I'm sorry about your friend. Keep writing, I'm glad to see someone who actually writes about what theyre feeling. <3

Wow this is amazing, and it does feel like you were put in her shoes very well. Then we felt like we had been placed somewhere other then our own shoes as well. Magnificent job.