Excellent Kyrielle. Very sad, the refraining line was great.
Very heartfelt. Great job Bryan :)
Take Care Your friend Cindy

Cool I like this style alot especially that the last line repeats. Then it is required that the last line i stroing which it is in your case.. A very good poem bryan in every way..

Take Care =D

I liked this style i found it to be quite interesting to read. The repetition of the style was great and held an impact, your word choice was amazing and held such emotion. Well done on a nicely written poem~mel

The emotions attached in the poem generated an effect to the reader which was quite poignant; it's one of the major highlights of your poetical works--a bittersweet aftertaste.

Reasonably astonishing, I dare say. Nice job, dear! Love, Debbie Cakes

I loved this one excellent poem

I liked it. The words you used was great. I gave it a 5/5.

I will always love you,
for the rest of my years,
my love will be eternally true,
In This Fortress of Tears.

my fave stanz...
love the whole thing though. 5/5