I like this is really cool that you wrote the poem in this form!!! way to be unique!!! good poem!
peace

WOW beautifully written poem , I love it,great job
keep up the good work and have a great day, your friend Tracy5/5~

You did great.

It is sooooo awesome that you used that old english typed theme. it kind of reminded me of one of shakesperes works.... and thats a good thing! keep up the good work....

nice job,
kelly

Very unique. I enjoyed seeing you change up the norm. I think you did good job. the flow was good, interesting style and perfect length.

I think you did just fine with the old english. I can't ever understand old english and I couldn't quite understand this so great job! *laughing* I understood the poem though.