Great ending and beginning.
cheer up!
5/5

I really enjoyed your poem and the sadness that it portrayed. I know what it feels like to be afraid of graduation and moving on with life, everything seems to be as good as it gets right now. I promise things will get better and you'll keep your old friendships while making new ones. Excellent job 5/5

Stanza 1: Don't capitalize and, and to.
Stanza 2: Never is used quite a bit in this one stanza. Don't capitalize says, but.
Stanza 3: Capitalize "I". Uncapitalize keeps, with, and but.
Stanza 4: Great.
Stanza 5: Uncapitalize 'no' and, 'and'.
Stanza 6: 'caused' 'but' need to be uncapitalized.
Stanza 7: Uncapitalize 'while'
Stanza 8: 'but' and 'that' need to be uncapitalized.

Overall: You did a wonderful job with this poem. Great emotion, good choice of words.
Keep it up. <3

Ok, since the grammar police already showed up...

Anyway, I strongly identify with the sentiments you've expressed in this piece. You've managed to craft your despair into a wonderful work of art. :)

Thank you for calling my attention to this one!

~ Chad

This one is gr8 with a flawless flow. The wordings r strong n with great meanings. Great piece 5/5

My heart bears the marks of holes
Caused by so many multiple wounds.
I try so hard to keep going strong
But always end up falling too soon.

^^loved these lines...
from beginning to end..i loved it..the choice of words n the well penned emotions kept me hooked from the very beginning
great write

5/5!
xxPoojaxx