Dearest Heart: Part 3

These poems are a bit different, but in a good way. another good poem. well written. 5/5

~Chelsea~

"I think it is time you move on and forget [h]im."

Capitalizing the letter H in the word him/her is unnecessary, unless you are speaking of a God or a celestial being or something. Further, I was confused about the word "Her". (To whom were you speaking of?) Other than those trivial confusions, I, once again, find this third part intense and quite exhilirating. In fact, this was quite different from the conversational poems that I've read so far. Usually it's a vis-a-vis/heart-to-heart conversation, but I've never come up from a letter-to-letter/heart-to-mind conversation before! Haha. Additional props for that, m'dear. As for the piece, it was arguably wonderful and true. Something in which almost everyone in the whole human race can correlate with. Keep it up! Debbie

Ah...exactly whats been going on with me...I hate the mind for being so heartless, but the heart needs to accept the truth...ah...can't wait for the rest...

Wow really a true thing that you are writting, and the concept i must say is brillant, the word choice again as amazing, the emtion was strong. 5/5 I am my way to read the next part.

Hmm, the message once again was really good! i liked the way so talked about 'her' in the 2nd person..really effective towards the poem itself, the personification was also effective xx