Man. that was kinda harsh. im sure the heart didnt like that too much. =].

You left out sme punctuation and stuff.

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5/5

Wow how true is that, *huggles* I'm always here for you Danielle ^_^

This really shpws how the mind thinks much more rationally than the heart.
It was a little harsh but thats what we all need, to live in reality.
well done again
love Tara-Kay

Ok this is true.. sometimes we feel that if we dont get to close to someone then they wont hurt us as bad.. I have made that mistake. i let myself get to close only to have him hurt me. In a way i can relate to the Heart in this poem.
I think this flowed quite well. and i really liked this 5/5

Hey,
thats true, sometimes the heart and the mind are thinking different things, the one wish to move on while the other can't. I enjoy reading your work=) 5/5
kisses stephanie

Hmm, the message once again was really good! i liked the way so talked about 'her' in the 2nd person..really effective towards the poem itself, the personification was also effective xx

Wow really a true thing that you are writting, and the concept i must say is brillant, the word choice again as amazing, the emtion was strong. 5/5 I am my way to read the next part.

Ah...exactly whats been going on with me...I hate the mind for being so heartless, but the heart needs to accept the truth...ah...can't wait for the rest...

"I think it is time you move on and forget [h]im."

Capitalizing the letter H in the word him/her is unnecessary, unless you are speaking of a God or a celestial being or something. Further, I was confused about the word "Her". (To whom were you speaking of?) Other than those trivial confusions, I, once again, find this third part intense and quite exhilirating. In fact, this was quite different from the conversational poems that I've read so far. Usually it's a vis-a-vis/heart-to-heart conversation, but I've never come up from a letter-to-letter/heart-to-mind conversation before! Haha. Additional props for that, m'dear. As for the piece, it was arguably wonderful and true. Something in which almost everyone in the whole human race can correlate with. Keep it up! Debbie

These poems are a bit different, but in a good way. another good poem. well written. 5/5

~Chelsea~