by Misbah May 24, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
He means the world to me |
by PoetryKnight
This is exactally i was telling my sister, she asked me why i liked this girl and I couldn't tell her. it is something you can't just explain, it is something that comes from the heart |
Hey really well done. Theres a few spelling mistakes. But it was very cute and emotional. The flow wasnt great but for a first that was really great! Keep up the good work you have talent 5/5 |
by Allanon
Good flow with heartfilled emotion. i loved it. 5/5 if u not too busy please take time to read/comment about my poems thanks and great poem! |
by katie
This is cute. i liked it. |
by Boy
Ahh its awesome. that was great work very romanting. true love shines from you heart. i will must give you 5/5 |