OMJ this is a cute poem ... i love this poem... great job!!

"He knows exactly what's in her heart,
That her love for him is surely true,
He doesn't want for them to part,
But feels there's nothing he can do."

^^ thats my favorite stanza... i know how you feel... this has happened to me before... i can relate to this. keep up the good work... 5/5

Great Job..
Well Written..
The Flow was great..
I loved it...<33*

HELLA AWESOME!!..
:) Love it!

Nicely done!

I lvoe this poem and the ending x and o very talented keep on writting

Wow...that was really sad...but you wrote it so well i didn't want the poem to end 5/5<33

Wow. Thats all i can say........wow! This poem was simply A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. I could really feel the emotion of this poem. I absolutely L-O-V-E-D it. Keep it up.

~Brandy~

This is one of the better poems I've ever read. I think the rhyming is phenominal and the rhythm was great. This one hits home.

That was beautiful, i related to it so much! Truly inspiring!
xx

Extremly touching, ifelt every word, having nce been in the same situation as said girl, brought a tear, again, still, to my eye. great write