Hi .. welcome! .. =)

it seems u r new in here .. so WELCOME! .. ^_^

I really think u have a great talent .. I really hope to read new poems from u ..
By the way .. I added u to my favorite poets .. ^_^

And Maybe sometime u can check some of my work .. I'll be glad to hear your opinion .. =)

Take Care,
~hani~

Aww.. this is really sad.. i think it should be in the sad poems.. however, it is a fantastic write.. simple words but the ending was still really strong.. keep it up :D