Even when we really don't have anything important to say sometimes the silence kills us and we will speak of mindless chatter to get by and test the waters of the others mind. I found myself doing this alot with my ex, he was so quiet and I would just have to speak and say something to break the silence. Needless to say it did not work out, I am in love with conversation and if you cannot talk to someone then you have little else to go on. Good Write I enjoyed it.

Dixie

I like this piece not my favorite from you however cirtainly good you express this piece very well.

It was a good poem, I think you did a great job. You have two mistakes though..

(Cant) hear the words of hate I speak
= Can't

(Im) getting trapped in,
= I'm

This was an interesting read. I really like the concept. The flow was nice and made for a very pleasant read. 5/5

marcella