I Pledge Allegiance to the Noose {Triquatrain}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   May 24, 2007


And to the pains of which it stains,
I pledge allegiance to the noose,
Equal are we? Let's bruise your knees;
You and I are far from a truce.

The government will save you, this is true,
But you're guilty; red is dripping from your hands,
We'll march our way across the gays;
And to the noose for which it stands.

You want your money? You've got it hunny;
Look at the stupidity that you've produced.
If we once stood tall, we're bound to fall;
One nation under the noose.

You've failed your rein, I look at you with disdain;
Watch our nation as it hits a patch then slips and falls,
We'll keep the truce if you'll use the noose;
With liberty and justice for all.
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Rhyme:
(a,a)
b
(c,c)
b

(d,d)
e
(f,f)
e

(g,g)
h
(i,i)
h

. . . and so on.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Lucas Woods

    That was a great rhyme scheme for that particular poem, it could also be made into a song. Great structure...

  • 15 years ago

    by DourParoxysm

    Wow I've read a bunch of your stuff and have fallen in love with your writing. your very talented. Keep on keeping on.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Clap clap.
    its polictical its well written, it'll have an affect on everyone that reads it, because it has a statement.

    i'd also like to add, your titles of your poems are amazing.

  • 16 years ago

    by amber

    I'm a very big political person, i love it. It's the truth. How can you think your not good?? you're amazing. I'd be really honored if you would take a look at some of my work and give your advice.
    ~*~Amber~*~

  • 17 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    I'm proud of you good poem! Yeah I did an unpatriotic poem too...Then someone complained about it so I got a friendly little email that my poem has been deleted...They didn't even send it back to me. I had to bug my friends to go through their emails to find the stupid thing so that I could save it. Sigh...Well I loved the title first of all. I loved that you mentioned gays because I'm all for the rainbow people. Revolution! Puts fist in the air* 5.

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