by kitkat girl May 24, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
He tilts his head, her mind runs empty, a moment and she turns away, her thoughts come back, betrayal they say, closing her palms and beginning to pray. |
by Cella Bella
Wonderful imagery here! It was almost tlike a little sad love story, especially with the way it was structured. The well expressed emotion made for a very powerful write. 5/5 |
by Marc Ortiz
Another fine written piece by you. I enjoyed the imagery in this piece, good job. I like the emotions in this poem. |
by Adelle
A sad emotional poem dosen't quite flow I belive this has something to do with the layout a very well though out piece. |
by cassanova
Sweet poem and i too like the ending check out some of my poems "I WISH" |
by Robie Lincer
Thats a really nice poem! |