Aww, its sad, but nicley written

Thats a really nice poem!
and i loved the ending

"souls that didnt bleed"
really nice...
keep it up always!

Sweet poem and i too like the ending check out some of my poems "I WISH"

A sad emotional poem dosen't quite flow I belive this has something to do with the layout a very well though out piece.

Another fine written piece by you. I enjoyed the imagery in this piece, good job. I like the emotions in this poem.

Keep it up.

Wonderful imagery here! It was almost tlike a little sad love story, especially with the way it was structured. The well expressed emotion made for a very powerful write. 5/5

marcella