Comments : Empowered As She Falls Apart

  • 17 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Made me cry.

    I loved it, Im sorry you wrote it on experience.
    Been there.
    But about the poem ;

    I loved how it was a strange structure but still flowed.
    How every word clinged to the tip of my tongue and as I read I really enjoyed it.
    Was really..wow.

    Well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by swill

    Who hit you? Tell me. Just. Name. Him. Biches who think they're men just suck.