I really liked the poem.. but Im not really sure but it feels like there is something missing a word maybe .. there should be something else to describe the wolves.. becasue fearless be used over the centuries.. try to find something different for once.. but ohter than that it was good.. the flow was smooth .. good job and keep up the good work 4/5 |
I've always liked this poetry form and have done a couple myself, I also love wolves. Thus I found this a very excellent poem- very well written and great images. |
by Yuna
I love palendromes!! The mirror reflection worked well with this poem because all the words you used in between worked with the two subjects at each end. I really like the way you compared wolves and the moon as "Majestic". The word simply gives the poem just that much more. |
by unblue skye
Ooh i love this! it really describes wolves... n.n i love it! i could see a wolf taking shape in my mind.. ^^ great job!!!! 5/5 |
Beautiful palindrome, well written. I loved the imagery and feeling in this piece. Love Greta xo |