Girl, I feel the same way! I know how that feels.... >.<'' and yes it's a very inspiring poem... (( btw, I can't spell)) lol

-Katie Hayes

Wow.
That hit me hard.... I feel the exact same way, it hurts.

"their slender bodies burned into my memory."

^ I love that line, I can relate so much...
Anyway, the flow was flawless, the word usage was great, && the emotions were strong. Fabulous job! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Amen to that, names seem to hurt to most... (at least for me) i am sorry ou have to go through that, why can't everyone jsut be nice? :(

-love whitney-