This is a good poem. I like the way you used London Bridge through the poem.
peace

I thought your name was Britt? Omg...I'm so confused, but anyway. I really liked this poem, very creative. I agree with Kit-Kat Girl, the way you used London Bridge through the poem was really good. Keep up the good work.

-Heather

This poem was great! I loved it! Keep writing, I can't wait to read the next one!