I've noticed throughout your poems your word choice is amazing. Which I love. :] The words aren't 'cliche' words nor are they words people can't understand.
The flow in this poem was amazing, along with the emotions.
5/5
Great Job.

Your words are so powerful. The flow on this was awesome. It was a well written poem with emotion and great imagery.
Keep up the great work, my friend
love always, Tara-Kay
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