Wow this is a thought prvoking poem

I loved this poem I found it to hold such strong emotion and truth which you portrayed well into this. Thoughtful it had me thinking and I never lost interest at all. From start to finish this had me hooked. Well done on this an enjoyable and interesting read. Keep up the amazing work. 5/5 you truely deserve it with this. ~mel

Amazing poem. Your words deeply lured in your readers. I've never read a poem like this before and I enjoyed it very much.

Take care!

-Shannon <3

That... ..was beautiful. It felt really "in the moment" I like the aim for simplicity, but imagery in emotions.