Cycle of Hate

Great poem. That is the dark side of life for you. I think that it was good that someone desided to write about it. I gave it a 5/5.

First, this piece is excellent! :)

I wonder though, why you titled your request thread "I Ask For No More then For Someone to Understand My Poem." I saw in it meaning I felt fairly confident I was interpreting correctly. If you like, I'd be happy to discuss this with you at length, to see how well I registered your meaning.

Wow.. I really admire your work.. good choices of words that makes it deep and yet so powerful.. you have a really good creative side of you.. just like you have a really good talent which is poetry. so I hope you never stop using them becasue I would be interested into reading more of your poems.. so dont ever forget that.. good job and keep up witht the good work... 5/5

This poem reflects my theory of the time it takes for creation to reach a certain level of perfection, or if you will the light of truth dispersing the darkness in a heavenly harmony through the acceptance of Love and rejection of hate great poem

I thought this poem was great. The wording and everything was terrific.. I understood it completly..it was full of emotion..I loved every stanza..5/5
Tyanna