Here I stand All Alone

by Laura   May 25, 2007


~This poem is not done yet, but its a start please tell me what you think!~

Here I stand all alone
With nothing to do but cry
Here I stand all alone
I might as well just die

Here I stand all alone
With no shoulder to lean on
Here I stand all alone
With nothing to look upon

Here I stand all alone
Have to find my way on my own
Here I stand all alone
I guess that I'm now alone

Here I stand all alone
While I'm in the park
Here I stand all alone
In nothing but the dark

Copyright 2007 Laura Bolling

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Here I stand all alone
    With no shoulder to lean on
    Here I stand all alone
    With nothing to look upon"

    It's a very good start, you've set up an excellent rhythm with some powerful emotions.
    Keep at it =)
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    Awww hun, your never alone ok!!! if you ever want to talk just pm me ok!!! great flow to your poem though.