Comments : Here I stand All Alone

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    Awww hun, your never alone ok!!! if you ever want to talk just pm me ok!!! great flow to your poem though.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Here I stand all alone
    With no shoulder to lean on
    Here I stand all alone
    With nothing to look upon"

    It's a very good start, you've set up an excellent rhythm with some powerful emotions.
    Keep at it =)
    5/5
    *Gem*