by Melpomene
This was quite interesting. I enjoyed reading it alot and found it to be an excellent little tounge twister difficult to say with great words. Well done~mel |
Lol.....perfect...it made sense..lol...loved it...did'nt seem foced at all...perfect..n lovely tongue twisters...the language english can be fun when such type of poetry comes up..great work! |
by Tia
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Wow.. lol this made me laugh as I struggled to get parts of my brain back together.. very confusing.. but I could see why you wrote this lol.. good job and keep up with the good work |
by BECLiKEW0AHH
Wow. excellent poem. |
by Cindy
Fsams |
Wow i loved it....i had a good time reading! |
by ECILA ice
This is my first time reading in this category, fun and humor, and i enjoy it coz u wrote so well!!excellent work!!keep up the good work!!! |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Haha. I liked this one. Nicely done. I'm going to go find another to comment. |
by Mezmeryz
Lol hah =] this was definately quite annoying to read first lol couldn't understand it til i read the first stanza 3 times. well, it was definately interesting! nice work. |
by Live WeLL
Haha wow.. thats some pretty crazy stuff.. i liked it though.. kinda confusing but I'm guessing that's what you were going for.. lol.. good job.. thanks for the comment =] |
by Cyma Khan
Tht was great!!! |
by Black night
Heh, brilliant. loved it thought it was the epiphony of our language - one that is so simple and yet soooo complicated. |
This was definitely funny, amusing and pathetically correct. The assumption some people have of the English language and trying to speak it let alone write it is confusion enough. If it makes sense it probably isn't correct. Thumbs up for the write. Good Job, |
by Marc Ortiz
Ahahaha! I tried saying it really fast. and I laugh on myself! well done! I enjoyed reading this one! keep up the good work! and by the way its really good! 5/5! |
by Deana
Could our forefathers have made it any more confusing? great work ,catchy. |
by Tori Lynn
Yea.. this deffinatly confused me! |
by Bug1219
That really good! |
by claire
Totaly no where ur coming from - English rlly makes no sense. I tried to understand ur poem, but after the third try i only understood about three verses |
by Wallace
Wow, very good, nice use of vocanulary you showed how the english language is so complicated thats why I'm glad its my first language cause learning it as a second language would take me forever, good job. |