Hah
this was really cool
very original
i loved it

It really made me laugh mohammed and your choosing of words were really amazing
Don't forget to check your pm's by the way
Keep it up hunnie
Take care,
Laura

LOL! This is hilarious and fun!..and sure as hell is confusing, but woOOw.. its awesome and I love it! ^_^ well done! XD

Omg, this is really cool...i had to read it twice, i really got confused...
really funny
(i'm a non-nativ speaker...always learning...lol)
now, really, i enjoyed reading this, it was really nice...
5/5
*isabel*

I no u hav a lot of comments already but I gotta add that that is a really cool poem!!! I give u a 5!!!

Its good really good ^^ and funny confusing but funny I enjoyed reading it

Wat's so hard bout this!!

Aaah very funny. good luck in contest nomination. my vote is with you

Yeah very confuzzled

Wow u confused me! U must b a gud language learner. he he tc

Here you go agian making people think. That was really diffrent, and as always diffrent is good in my eyes, I like the catchy flow and the word choice eas great perfectly done. even quitw funny

That's really funny. my mom is an english teacher and oh the Lord knows... she's so confussing, but gets her point across!! i love the poem thank you for the laugh!

LOL
My brain just started dancing
For a while until I get it
NICE PO3M!
5/5

That was a good poem, but I got lost because it was so confusing. I think you got your point across. Lol. Good job!

Very cute poem.

Wow, this was a tongue twister, atleast for me. English is confusing and your poem proved this. I read it really slow and then I tried to read it really fast. It is a fun piece. 5/5 This piece was simply amazing and made me laugh. =]

Jackie Marie.

Okay now this was confusing.
but i did understand something = )
lol
best wishes
and take care

An unique poem, very confusing too.
My English is not that good, but I'd read it really slow.
Great poem.

Being as slow as I am I had to read this twice to really enjoy it. The rythming scheme was well done and the words were used well. I liked it alot the second time I read this good job Plot121

Woah.. slow down! That is THE most amazing poem I have ever read. What a tongue twister! I don't think I could say that aloud if I tried. Which I think I will.. hold on! Hmm.. that went better than I thought it would. Anyways, great job! (You are definitely going on my favorites list right now.) 5/5