Very punny and quite clever

What and interesting tongue twister! Ahaha I loved it. I still can't stop laughing.
That was extreamly well written as always.
well done,
Elaine. 5/5

Haha!! it was funny but it still had the power to let me ponder about some of the things. I like it, I think I'm going to try to write a poem like that, seeing that I have never writtena funny poem. great Job, you actually inspired me

Ahaha i think this poem is adorible and hilarious.. such good wording!!
its so funny, good job!!
i added this one to my favorites

I love this one! I thought it was great. :) I gave it a five because it made me smile.

Unique, not that I've read "a lot" of poetry, but this is a new topic. I thoroughly enjoyed the read, nice work.

stanza 4 - the flow was very fractured in these two lines due to the lack of an indefinite article ('a') and punctuation (';'). I'm not sure if this was your intent, but if it was I would consider revising, I'm not sure it's worth the loss of flow in the poem.

stanza 6, line 2 - "utter" is awkward. from yell to speak? Seems more like it's thrown in for the rhyme scheme

stanza 7, line 1 - "refused" just doesn't fit - nor would it fit under the pretense of the theme of the poem, same as previous comment, seems more of a filler word to complete the rhyming.

Haha very cute and confusing hahaha... And it totally makes sense though good job!

Sometimes sense doesn't make sense
If you write 'no sense makes sense'

A sentence with no sense
Is senseless nonsense
[[Within these four lines you used "sense" seven times.. and I hate a word being repearted once. =/. So. It sounds really bad and like you lacked words. Bad.]]

Taken aback, surprised, refused?
Well its English for the confused
[[I love this. Haha.]]

Now, this is wonderful. No one could write something better due to the topic; this is the best.. it's wonderfully written and so true. Thanks for showing us with true how confusing it really is.
I have to give you a five just for writing, and writing it well. =]

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

Lol, this poem is amazing! I love it and the last lines are strong and bold and ... well ... the perfect ending.

Well, this was really different. Lol. A tounge twister indeed. Lol
But great job 5/5
((Amber))

Wow..Tongue twister...But it was enjoyable to read...It was funny...

5/5

This is all so true, english is a very complicated language becasue we all change it using slang and stuff, this was amazing. It really made me think while reading it and i had to read it a few times. i really loved it!! Another 5/5

Very nice! *claps* This poem might I say was very interesting, and well written! It really had me wanting to read more. It was a great poem with humor ^_^
Keep it up! Your doing awesome! easy 5/5!
~Blood Angel

Haha very clever... love it

WOW IM LAUGHING lol 5/5

Well, you got me confused:D Very funny and ryhmed so good :) Also, was funny! :D Enjoyed this!
5/5

HAHA I love this!
beautifully written, original and unique in concept and it made me smile =)

Ha ha, so true! Very comical, It even confused me in parts, what a wonderful language we speak!
Greta

The beginning is kind of confusing, but the end is good man. nice job.

LOL that wqas very cute and ohhh so ever true.
Nice job and thanks for the laugh hun.

--Sher