Lol cute, you write cute little poems, it's great. good comic relief, nice job.

Lol, very funny, I liked it. Your word choices were excellent and they flowed nicely. Great job, keep it up.

I like this one

Hehe its like a tongue twist in the beginning,, well i laugh at the end..i appreciate ur work .. nice one

Lol perfect sentence hahahaha..i love to read your poem unique topic...5/5

Well..i liked it! =)

my english isn't so good..it's not my native language..0_o
but your poem made lots of sense.. in a really weird way..=P

but what is absense? is that d same as absence?

anyway, your really good!^___^ whether you write about serious stuff or not.. =)

To write a poem like this takes quite a bit of talent, and I think you nailed it. Of course, the english skills that you possess help immensely. I'm a perfectionist when it comes to the english language. Very well written, 5/5 from me

- Sam

Umm.... clever, but really hard to read.

Oh boy. you got your point across.
im all confused now! but great idea

Cool one...i like it...

Ey man that was really tight.. hahah you gotta a good imagination to think of all those.. haha good job latez ey ima post this freestly later i would like if u wud comment .. nice job done

Wow, that was quite the tongue twister!

~remmi~

Oh my, I may have just stumbled across one of the brightest people on this site!
As well as being very clever, it was a highly successful toungue twister.
I could'nt say it.
I'm a failure when it comes to attempting toungue twisters.
Ok, i'm going to have another go...
:)
Kat x

Lol SOOOOO CONFUSING!

Ha ha this is how i feel sometimes in my english class! lol

Wow, my head is spinning... sense, cut utt... and I thought I knew English... This poem is great. You can really get lost in it, great job 5/5:)

Possibly the best poem in the funny section that I have read since the JPM days.

Superb.

This poem holds meaning to me simply because it is greatly written and it is funny as well as descriptive and shows an output that many wouldn't have thought of writing about.

Overall a great write from a great poet. The flow was just alright, but I'll get into that in a little bit. The structure was nice a sound which gave the poem a stronger feeling.

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Intense in tense isn't a sentence
Tensed in tense is past tense

^^What a tounge twister...hence the reason it is located under Tounge Twisters. Anyways, This stanza shows that ryhming can be reletivly easy if you look in the right spots.

This is a pretty intense stanza that shows the tense of the sentence which really isn't a sentence.

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Sometimes sense doesn't make sense
If you write 'no sense makes sense'

^^Another great stanza in this tounge twister. It shows that even when something doesn't seem to make sense it really does make sense, you just have to look deeper into it for it to make sense.

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A sentence with no sense
Is senseless nonsense

^^hahaha, I couldn't help but laugh at this stanza. It is so true, and greatly worded.

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Absenteeism is noun what's absense
Essential is verb what's essence

^^Again great little stanza here, however I felt that it didn't really fit with the flow of the rest of the poem.

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What makes a synonym
Can make an acronym

^^Here is another stanza which is greatly constructed, however; yet again I felt it doesn't belong in this poem, it's just kind of thrown in there.

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You cut the cut with cutter
You speak, yell and utter

^^I must say all the stanzas are greatly worded and constructed, however; when all pieced together it is almost like you were trying to piece this together from a puzzle. Just didn't fit in with the begining of the poem I felt.

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Taken aback, surprised, refused?
Well its English for the confused

^^A great finish to the poem. I loved this stanza the most. It made me laugh for it is so true, and yet it is so simply written.

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Keep up the fantastic work.

Peace, Joe

Wow lol this was a fun poem..when i was midway through reading it i started imagining eminem was raping it lol

Haha i loved it
i got an english lesson and a tounge work out all in one.