The down pour

by Stephanie Naylor   May 25, 2007


We sat on the steps of the front porch
Watching as the lightning
paints a picture across the sky

and as the thunder plays its
rhythmic beat
not another move or another sound

you pull me in your arms
and you just look in my eyes
then you tell me you love me

and you kiss my lips softly
just so delicate
and then the rain begins to pour

its pours happiness
and lust into this moment
making it special

a day of the DOWNPOUR
when you kissed me
for the first time

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just thinking of the time my ex boyfriend first kissed me, it was great, though it wasn't my first kiss

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  • 14 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    A great memory. Aren't first kisses great? At least, this kiss went very well. A very good write. Such talent for your age.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Not great, but good all the same, the imagery was good and it flowed well. i just think it was too much like other love poems i've read.
    love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by Chad Picard

    This poem very nearly brought tears to my eyes. The image you painted was so beautiful that, at first, they were tears of joy. Then, because I realized that this will be ending for you, they turned to tears of sadness. Great piece and may you find ~Peace~ soon.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. I really liked the words you used. I could see it in my head. I gave it a 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!=)...very cute.....the atmosphere u created in the poem n the choice of words was superb......very cute work filled with love..
    Kp it up!

    5/5=)
    xxPoojaxx

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