Wow!=)...very cute.....the atmosphere u created in the poem n the choice of words was superb......very cute work filled with love..
Kp it up!

5/5=)
xxPoojaxx

Great poem. I really liked the words you used. I could see it in my head. I gave it a 5/5

This poem very nearly brought tears to my eyes. The image you painted was so beautiful that, at first, they were tears of joy. Then, because I realized that this will be ending for you, they turned to tears of sadness. Great piece and may you find ~Peace~ soon.

Not great, but good all the same, the imagery was good and it flowed well. i just think it was too much like other love poems i've read.
love Tara-Kay
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A great memory. Aren't first kisses great? At least, this kiss went very well. A very good write. Such talent for your age.