That was a very good poem. is really from the top of your head?it was really good

Thank you for your comment.
i done that while i was at work.
i was bored.

This is a very good poem and really good for english being your second language. I have one suggestion at the below part:
"goping that one day her prince will come and rescue her"
Instead of goping it should be hoping.
Below is my favorite part from your poem:

"months have passesd her by
and now all she ever does is cry,,
asking her self, ( if the sun is shinning)
why am i still crying..,"
keep it up.
peace

Thank you.

I really like this poem! it is lovely!
Keep it up!