Wow that was really strong and sad. well written great job

I love this poem! ALone, I love the intensity of this! I forgot to breath on one part! Excellent job!

Omg this is really, really good! Just the intensity, alone, in this poem was amazing! There were times in this poem where i forgot to breathe! Awesome job! 5/5

Wow. im so speechless! this was deep. and very expressive, i love poems that come from the heart, and i can tell this one did. this poem defenatly touched me. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Great poem!

WOW nicely written it expresses TRUE emotions and pain that you went through i LOVED it 5/5 gosh your good so far the best poems iv read today lol keep up the excellent work