Wow, that was really dark and amazing. i love it. great write. 5/5

Nice flow 5/5

This is a well written poem. It's really good!

Wow, this poem is very good. I loved it from start to finish. Keep up the great work 5/5
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Kinda scary! lol. The mind can be a dangerous thing depending on how you use it and act with it.

I like the poem. Very good.

Very nice write! keep up the good work!
god bless!

Wow. like the poem..kinda reminds me of one of mines lol. good work!

Nice poem.
Really dark.
Good rhyming.
Liked reading it, nice work
Take care

5/5, Excellent, love you choice of words.