MOCKING

by DAYLON   May 25, 2007


I do like my country that changes a name of a problem to solve it,
I do like my council to ignore the problems of anti-social behaviour,
I do like my area that I live in turning into a decay sess pit of Hell,
I do like my rats bathing in fortnightly collection rubbish.
Country led by idiots at the top trying to ruin our lives,
Bringing out the dead policies would be a god send.

Stupid! STUPID!

I do like kids beating up an elderly person in they're homes,
I do like criminals getting less time than a married man,
I do like Great Britain as a spineless zombie chicken nation,
I do like Nazi job centres not listening to people.
Country led by idiots at the top trying to ruin our lives,
Bringing out the dead policies would be a god send.

Pathetic! PATHETIC!

I do like people, who think they're god gift to this earth,
I do like the way you kick innocent people down, enjoy!
I do like criminals having sky and pool table in prison,
I do like government ripping us off for every penny we earn.
Country led by idiots at the top trying to ruin our lives,
Bringing out the dead policies would be a god send.

Bring out all to the bon fire and create a new world,
Let us the people bring about a change we all can enjoy.

NOTE: When you first read it you think I like watching people get kicked in and stuff. When really you dig a little deeper and I am being sarcastic in my poem that I wish my country would be great again. Instead of all the corruption that goes on.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    ...It's kinda evident there's another thing going on in this piece rather than surface value. In a way the...sarcasm can be seen quite clearly. It doesn't flow super great cuz of some mispelled words and all but there's something about this that kinda just...makes it interesting.
    'Country led by idiots at the top trying to ruin our lives,
    Bringing out the dead policies would be a god send.'
    Okay these lines are really my favorite. And the repetition of them is great and effective.
    'I do like my rats bathing in fortnightly collection [[of]] rubbish.'
    I laughed at this line cuz I could actually envision it. Though it's not meant to actually portray humor I did get that sense cuz I've seen some crazy stuff like that and know I hate it which makes the sarcasm that much evident to me. It's something very different from anything I've ever seen which makes it stand out that much more. Despite some mispelled words it was actually a cool write.
    ~Faith-less