Another great poem by you. you are a talented writer and that is showen in your wonderful poems.
keep up the great work.another 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

This was wonderful. The flow was immaculate and you told a solid story of love, which was absolutely beautiful to read.

Very well done. :]

This is really great. I think the best I have read from you. The structure need and well presented and the emotions were portrayed greatly. Well done on a sweet love poem you have here. Keep writing~mel

This is beautifully written...I found it to be very moving.
The flow is good throughout the entire piece and the imagery you portrayed was beautifully done, it created vivid pictures for me.
I liked the repetition you used, I thought it got your point across very well.

The softer side of you really came out in this poem, I loved the way your words flowed in this piece and the mood you set was nice Plot121

I like the structure of the poem :) Flow was smooth, I really like the imagery created in the poem. You deserve a 5/5!

Great nice poem:)
i can feel the emotion in your poem
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I can see elegant choice of words in your poem. Another element a certain poem containing is what mesmerizes me. 5/5