Short but sweet. keep it up. 5/5

Such a short twisted and dark poem. I loved it expeccailly the last two lines. really really good. you have talent, and you style is diffrent, siffrent is alwys good/ 5/5 once agian

Twisted - excellent.
This was a great poem, i didnt what was coming next and i was gripped which is hard to achieve with such a short poem. Loves it.

Kelly
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