by JustBeingDevine May 25, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Your lips speak soft sweetness |
by Fan Angeleo
I like this very much. |
by *Charisma*
This was a sweet piece! Your last line was the only line that really threw the flow off. I would just take out the word "before" and that would help the flow. Just a suggestion. But this was a truly sweet piece! |
by show stopper
Wow i really like this one.... |