Comments : Just You

  • 17 years ago

    by show stopper

    Wow i really like this one....
    and i know exactly what you mean lol

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    This was a sweet piece! Your last line was the only line that really threw the flow off. I would just take out the word "before" and that would help the flow. Just a suggestion. But this was a truly sweet piece!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    I like this very much.