Too bad for heaven

by Birgit   May 25, 2007


This is not one of my best.. I was just thinking of death.. and then this came out..

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What happens when you die?
When you're good..
Then is it true..
That you go to some place in the sky?

And when you're bad,
where do you go then?
Does heaven stripe me off a list,
Cause I've been too bad for them?

Is it true that hell,
Will welcome me,
And they'll never send me back to heaven..
Just to make me scream and yell?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Haha it sounds interesting and free flow of feelings. Great work 5/5 keep writing dear

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    Yes, I thought so... hmm, this wasn't your best work but it certainly isn't horrible at all. It only needs more coherent details, I dare say. :) In any case, I believe that every person comes to the point of thinking these questions somewhere in their lives. :) But then again, I gladly have found the answers of the Truth. It is up to you now to discover the Knowledge and the Truth, my friend...Peace Profound...

  • 17 years ago

    by The Black Rose

    This certainly isnt one of your best poems but its okay i think.
    btw: i think u'll go to the thing u name as: Heaven

    *hugs*

  • 17 years ago

    by Zima Ultifera

    Very good dear birgit :D
    One of your best work sure is this :D
    Love it!! [L]!! :D

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