Very good dear birgit :D |
This certainly isnt one of your best poems but its okay i think. |
by Debbie
Yes, I thought so... hmm, this wasn't your best work but it certainly isn't horrible at all. It only needs more coherent details, I dare say. :) In any case, I believe that every person comes to the point of thinking these questions somewhere in their lives. :) But then again, I gladly have found the answers of the Truth. It is up to you now to discover the Knowledge and the Truth, my friend...Peace Profound... |
by Fsams
Haha it sounds interesting and free flow of feelings. Great work 5/5 keep writing dear |