I love it goran, of course why wouldn't i? it was absolutely and stunningly beautiful, so heartfelt. another great one by my favorite poet on here, you're the best. 5/5

I liked the repitition of this poem and topic
I especially liked this because almost everyone can relate to this
My fave lines should be,

I trusted you,
For a love that meant my life.
I trusted you,
Giving you my heart's key.

Well done
Sincerely,
Laura

Beautiful poem..well penned n simple words...yet it conveys the message across...to the point..yeah...sure not one of your best...but good work..
it had it's charm..
5/5!=)
xxPoojaxx

PS:
I didid Know=I did'nt know

Hey,
wow I love this poem, its a bit short but has very strong words, and I know what you mean that's why I now think, some secrets are never to be told,, anyway back to the poem, the flow is perfect and easy to read its definitely one of my favorites;)
keep up the good work 5/5
kisses stephanie

Wow. Nicely done. I liked the repetition in this poem. And the way the ending sorta contrasted the beginning. <3

Kitty.loves.your.awesome.poems.

5/5.

Aww strong poem. I also like the repetition:). All the emotions going through this, so true poem.
Keep up the excellent work! 5/5

Interesting... I don't really like love poems, but... I don't think this was bad at all.
Oh, I was going through your poems, and I noticed they're mostly about love. I'd like to see the darker side of your poetry some time, I don't doubt you have one. =P

Happy writing.
Hannah-

Sorry hone for being away for a while, you know i had personal problam and it was not that easy to handle. thank you for the concern, I got your message the other day. it was very nice of you. you are so sweet.

I like this poem because it is again written by you and it seems like it has its own perpase that cannot be reveled easily. i know you.lol.
again nice poem that we enjoyed. waiting for the poem you told me about. please post it soon.

Thinking you are innocent.
^ "were" not "are"

Thinking you have trust on me.
^ "had" not "have" and i think it would be better if it was "in" not "on"

You will tell everyone in this city.
^ "would" not "will"

Awh, this was really good. I loved how it had such a simple structure but so much meaningg. The words you used were good and there was lots of emotion and even a bit of irony in there. Nicely done. 5/5

I love this poem, it is what i am going through right now and i couldnt have put it in better words.
ps thanx for the comment

This is the fourth time I`ve tried comenting this poem -.- Internet is being a fag . So sorry if this isn`t lengthy .

My favourite lines were:
`I trusted you
For a love that meant my life.

Totally sweet wihtout being cheesy . Overall, I think you did a good job with this . I feel that you could done better with the ending, it just wasn`t as strong as the rest of the poem, but I still enjoyed it [:

Love this poem!