Lovely poem, i especially like the first stanza! well written, keep it up :D

"How my heart yearns for your touch and affection,
But that which is broken from lack of connection,"

Those lines were my fav! This poem was very good! You have some neat imagery in it that really helps you visualize the depth and strength of the love you feel. It was a good piece!
Charisma*

Wonderful job on this piece. Imagery is excellent. The love shines from your words.

Your precious laugh warms my broken soul,
Your jokes lift me like a newborn foal,
That feels my heart with love for you,

I loved these lines.
Take care Cindy

This is actually really good..

"Seeking comfort from this pain,
To stop myself from going insane,
The wonderful bliss of dreams I take,
In my world where there I fake"

You have such a talent here, after i read your profile, i thought the poems would be the same slang style. But they are really beautiful.
Well done =)
5/5
*Gem*