Me and my evening

by Superna Verma   May 25, 2007


I saw a lonely evening sitting on the lounger
as solitary as i am
Trying to stop pretending like a stranger
Moving ahead in her own world of darkness
Murky sky stretching to emptiness....
Wishing badly for a day to break this spell of seclusion
As badly as i am
i hope this evening overcomes the night to get the dawn
so that i can also think of carrying on

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Hi... It's a good poem. I like non-rhythmic poems. The description is good. And the lines as well.
    But one friendly advice... try to be more grammatically correct in the sense of punctuation marks etc. I hope you didn't mind for saying me that. Take care.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great poem good flow and wording was great ,great job, sad but I loved it , keep it up, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

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