Candle so black

by StonedGooberz   May 25, 2007


Candle so black
that my flame becomes dark
my soul begins to die
without some kind of show able mark.

My heart bleeds red
for the love i miss
on my knee's i plead
for the spell bounding kiss

am i going to die?
so long i have waited for the end
my heart is breaking
with no ability to mend.

Am I already dead?
i hear no heartbeat
i can barely breathe
in this air of deceit.

she loves me
she loves me not
staring down the barrel
but did not hear the gunshot.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great job on your poem. very deep and intense.

    Am I already dead?
    i hear no heartbeat
    i can barely breathe
    in this air of deceit.

    This stanza really is heartfelt.
    Take care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    The stanza is in there to introduce the other poem... soryy about that

  • 17 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Basically what im trying to do is take the stanza's in the poem and turn them into their own poems...like candle so black, then it will go to she loves me, and so on and so forth.... just look at the other poem called candle so black and u will understand... hope u enjoy

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