Basically what im trying to do is take the stanza's in the poem and turn them into their own poems...like candle so black, then it will go to she loves me, and so on and so forth.... just look at the other poem called candle so black and u will understand... hope u enjoy

The stanza is in there to introduce the other poem... soryy about that

Great job on your poem. very deep and intense.

Am I already dead?
i hear no heartbeat
i can barely breathe
in this air of deceit.

This stanza really is heartfelt.
Take care Cindy