Comments : Silent Cries

  • 17 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Wow... that's so sad. nice, flow, nice imagery too. good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a heart wrenching poem. The feelings of dispair cry out in this piece.

    She sits down and the waves pull her in,
    no one cares even though she can't swim.

    These lines are heartbreaking.
    Keep writing
    Take care Cindy